Reviewing something that needed betaing.
Feb. 5th, 2006 12:53 pmGuess who got an email asking for a review? Me! A NaNoer on LuLu.com sent an email asking folk to review her newly published book.
( What she wrote )
However, after reading her first chapter, here: http://www.lulu.com/content/195070 , I decided to reply with email instead.
( What I wrote )
Really, after the 'if I had any USD virtualised' I should have said 'and these things were fixed.' *mulls it over*
Anyway, what do you think of me? Too harsh? Not constructive enough? Fair?
( What she wrote )
However, after reading her first chapter, here: http://www.lulu.com/content/195070 , I decided to reply with email instead.
( What I wrote )
Really, after the 'if I had any USD virtualised' I should have said 'and these things were fixed.' *mulls it over*
Anyway, what do you think of me? Too harsh? Not constructive enough? Fair?