It does seem to have fallen into a deep abyss of ciché - People have gone over the same tracks so many times that they can't think of an original plot any more. And all the clichés are boring though the 'oh noes rai is evil what will she do one can have some interesting twists if the author remembers Clay and Omi.

I have so many logical fallacities in my genfic that I have to have a 12 year old beta reader to make sure that things make sense. XD